thwarted

Post by **mccutcheon** » Fri Mar 26, 2004 1:21 pm

from my new country song "God ain't noting but a nuance"

'I was on the night train
drinking purple rain
the nuance of the evening sky
was floating through my brain
my woman kicked me out
now it's a long ride to nowhere
without a washing machine
how my woman got so mean
I blame it on the pussy wax
we used to never fight
before we went wireless
I'll just sit here growing tired
with a copper ladle up my ass'

marky · Post by **marky** » Sun Mar 28, 2004 6:14 am

Almost perfect, but you forgot the copper ladles! Come on man, we gotta get copper ladles in there somewhere.

Post by **mccutcheon** » Sun Mar 28, 2004 6:18 pm

How's that? I got them in there somewhere.

Guest · Post by **Guest** » Mon Mar 29, 2004 7:04 am

Ouch! I fear only Mav can comment, now.

By the way I'm Marky, not a guest. I've been barred from the gates of Paxacidus due to the fact that I can't log in. It's all a conspiracy I'm sure.

Come to think of it, though...it's cool in the sense that I don't have to be bothered to log out.

Guest · Post by **Guest** » Mon Mar 29, 2004 10:43 pm

I can't log in either. McCutcheon

Maverick · Post by **Maverick** » Thu Apr 01, 2004 6:28 am

I think it should be "God ain't nothing but a nuisance"

In fact, If you haven't copyrighted it, I might write a story with that title...

marky · Post by **marky** » Fri Apr 02, 2004 8:45 am

Oh Mav, I can see it now! It should be a children's story set in a forest...squirrels with mini-electric guitars...