I think this counts as literature..

Jungle junkie · Post by **Jungle junkie** » Fri Jan 24, 2003 1:26 am

Its a sexy poem. I love it. Its my bedtime story.

You leaned over and touched my lips
I felt your breath trickle down my neck
My heart was beating insanely
While your skin crawled with anticipation

A burst of anger escaped my eyes
When your hands dared to go above my waist
A longing harder than a diamond rushed in my veins
As I laid down slowly to consume the passion

You whispered words of my sweet innocence
I could only smile when our lips brushed my side
You mumbled things of my passion for words
I could only breathe when your heartbeat matched mine

My fingernails clung onto your sweaty back
I was scared to loose myself in the moment of sensitivity
I could hear your skin breaking beneath my frantic claws
I felt your blood and was please by the sign of humanity

Your teeth grazed the top of my ear as you smiled
I heard your lungs struggling to keep up with your demand
"You're so passionate" you told me
"But I bet you're poisonous."

End!
Yay!

Post by **mccutcheon** » Fri Jan 24, 2003 5:06 pm

nice one. this is my favorite line-

I heard your lungs struggling to keep up with your demand

blueimac540c · Post by **blueimac540c** » Tue Jan 28, 2003 4:07 am

Good stuff. good stuff...

rabbit · Post by **rabbit** » Tue Jan 28, 2003 6:39 am

i think too many girls relate to that.

Jungle junkie · Post by **Jungle junkie** » Tue Jan 28, 2003 8:37 am

Thank you. Its been a loong time since I've written anything and this is one of the things I spit out one night while crying and slobbering because my boyfriend had been missing for five hours without a sign.

Jungle junkie · Post by **Jungle junkie** » Tue Jan 28, 2003 3:31 pm

What's wrong with girls relating to poetry?

rabbit · Post by **rabbit** » Tue Jan 28, 2003 5:04 pm

i meant "crying and slobbering because my boyfriend had been missing for five hours without a sign."

xquisid3 · Post by **xquisid3** » Tue Jan 28, 2003 9:25 pm

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You may as well ignore the weight loss tips, open up a can of creamy ale, and find a fatter boyfriend who appreciates you for who you are. <blockquote><font size="1" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica">quote

right on, right on..

<Jack Chiefton> · Post by **<Jack Chiefton>** » Wed Jan 29, 2003 12:10 am

"A longing harder than a diamond rushed in my veins." Not bad. Have you found your boyfriend yet?

Jungle junkie · Post by **Jungle junkie** » Wed Jan 29, 2003 4:15 am

Well he wasn't with anyone. His car had broke down and I'm the type to over react when someone who normally calls when they get home..suddenly doesn't call, doesn't return 911 pages. Okay..I even called his mom bawling. What a freak am I?

But um. Yes, I am a raging over emotional and jealous bitch. Still interested in being my playtime boyfriend, Mr. Jack? Or anyone else for that matter..?

I want more feedback on this poem! Did it turn anyone on? Help anyone's sex life??

Post by **Sloth** » Wed Jan 29, 2003 7:53 am

I just looked at your picture. It doesn't seem like you need to lose any weight. Maybe your boyfriend has no pulse.

I think you need some psychoslothanalysis from Dr. Sloth.

Tell me more details. I have a degree in philosophy which trumps those psychology people. I want all the juicy details.

Post by **Sloth** » Wed Jan 29, 2003 8:53 am

If your boyfriend is out for five hours with someone else... then he is not your boyfriend.

You may as well ignore the weight loss tips, open up a can of creamy ale, and find a fatter boyfriend who appreciates you for who you are.

tashasimone · Post by **tashasimone** » Wed Jan 29, 2003 9:20 pm

Now, do you want actual real constructive critisism, hunny, or do you want me to tell you what you want to hear? I can do either, but really, i'd rather tell you the truth.

I dont think you need to lose weight either, but then again i have always been the one who thinks the thick girl is hot. I like asses, and boobs, and some girls can be bigger and hotter than even me. (just kiddin) but seriously, shake what 'cha momma gave ya! and be proud of who and what you are!

rabbit · Post by **rabbit** » Wed Jan 29, 2003 11:48 pm

im with tashasimone and sloth.

tashasimone · Post by **tashasimone** » Thu Jan 30, 2003 4:44 am

spike i think me and you are soulmates.