2 girls to get over 1 by me

Post by **mccutcheon** » Sun Jun 17, 2001 9:13 am

here is the new story. tell me if it's too porno. thnaks.
http://www.paxacidus.com/read/2girls.htm

Jack Chiefton · Post by **Jack Chiefton** » Mon Jun 18, 2001 3:06 am

A well written porno. I love the ending and the line "I should break up more often" or something to that nature.

Post by **mccutcheon** » Mon Jun 18, 2001 3:36 am

thanks Jack

Post by **mccutcheon** » Wed Jun 27, 2001 3:34 am

I'm spewing a lot of shit so I'm not posting for a while. somebody else do this. I need to work on something worthwhile.

Post by **mccutcheon** » Wed Jun 27, 2001 7:43 am

here is the revised version.
http://www.paxacidus.com/read/2girls.htm

I never get it right on the first try. or as Natalie knows the 2nd, 3rd, 4th, 5th, 6th, 7th, 8th, 9th, 10th, 11th, 12th, 13th....you get the idea. Poor girl has to read all the bad versions. Or as Trevor says bad implies well, bad. they are all part of the formation.

Who wants to edit two 200 plus page novels? I need an editor damn it. what comes first the chicken or the egg? You get someone to publish your shit and they assign you an editor or you get an editor so someone will publish your shit? I need my editor like my psychiatrists-- female, easy on the eyes, who just sits and listens to what I say. No, I should make jokes at such a desperate times. I'm finding this writing gig to take longer than i thought. It's so hard but I love it so.

Irvine Welsh got the first thing he ever sent out published. When he got the reply he was coming back from a holiday and thought it was a wind up. Then again Mr. Welsh is Mr. Welsh and everyone knows how I, shhhh(sort of worship him) though I don't worship anyone because you have to be your own person.

I think of things (when i think at all) in the female form. Paris is female for me, writing is also. I'm trying to make my baby come. But I also want to be a sensitive lover, and a playboy. at what stage in my life will i be able to met some girl at a party and when she asks what i do I want to look her straight in the eye and say, "I'm a writer." I'm luckier than most because I like my job even though I make no money and am very poor and NOT a trust fund kid. damn i don't know how that one got started. I think you think of the Sloth who is rich. not me, I sleep on his living room floor. and people always write in and ask how i get to travel so much...well i was lucky there as well. i went to school in France and met wonderful people and lived all over the world meeting wonderful people ALSO I buy a fucking ticket. Yes I'm one of the ten percent of Americans with a passport. anyway where was I??? oh yes just leaving.

bicycleprince · Post by **bicycleprince** » Thu Mar 14, 2002 8:08 am

I agree that it is a well written porno. Very sexy.

Post by **Sloth** » Thu Mar 14, 2002 8:51 am

Yeah I'm rich that's why I live in a school dormitory and pay all the Pax Acidus hosting bills.

Never mind that your parents have a home the size of the Taj Mahal and damn well own the whole town they live in.

Never mind that you used to spend thousands of dollars per month on drugs and alcohol paid for by dear old papa and went on semester at sea and lollygagged around Europe and Asiua for ten years without a job.

Ah, the truth comes out.

Me rich.

Ha.

Now that's rich.

(please pass the caviar)

Post by **mccutcheon** » Thu Mar 14, 2002 6:02 pm

that was a half year jump. whooooo!

rabbit · Post by **rabbit** » Fri Mar 15, 2002 3:40 am

Ooh, i always thought you were rich

but now the truth comes out.
i think i could make this a movie..let me break out the trusty video camera..or let me find my webcam... anyways great story mc