Sex Scene a short, short story

Post by **mccutcheon** » Wed Mar 13, 2002 11:33 pm

Here is a short, short story, (less than a page- that's the trick) with no plot or discernable character development whatsoever, about two people who are less than 5 feet tall. But that last bit doesn't really have any reverence.

Sex Scene
By Mccutcheon

We are at it. She is on top of me giving herself a wild ride. With great determination her pelvis grinds into me. My own pelvis is getting bruised as she positions her clit to receive the most satisfaction. She can come while having sex. And she does. Then she comes again as I do. I explode with orgasm.

She hovers over me. A smile spreads across her face. Her lips stick to her gleaming white teeth. She stays like that for a moment, then dismounts.

“Where is the condom?” she asks.

“What condom?”

“What?” She asks alarmed.

“I didn’t use it. If we only have one I thought we should save it for later.”

“What!?”

She looks at me in disbelief. Her eyes widen in hatred. The close, extremely personal and passionate experience we have both just encountered is suddenly forgotten.

“What!?” She screams.

“Just kidding,” I say. I open my palm and show her the used pink condom filled with my cum.

“You’re funny,” she says.

Post by **mccutcheon** » Wed Mar 13, 2002 11:42 pm

The two diminutive individuals in question have become offended by my description of them.

“Can’t giants appear in a short, short story?” he asked.

“Prince is sexy,” she said.

<sarah> · Post by **<sarah>** » Thu Mar 14, 2002 12:10 am

just sex is fun to read. What did Anais' patron tell her -- leave the poetry out, or something like that.

Post by **mccutcheon** » Thu Mar 14, 2002 12:26 am

Sarah, so when are you going to start sending me the edited versions of Burnt I keep posting for you?

Post by **mccutcheon** » Thu Mar 14, 2002 12:58 am

I'm at a fashion shoot, you know how boring those are! But the studio has Internet access so what more can I say? And they have beer! In the waiting around with the models, I'm one of them, I'm stuck next to this one model and she isn't drinking, so I wrote that short short story. Most of the people here are tall.

<sarah> · Post by **<sarah>** » Thu Mar 14, 2002 2:29 am

vives los altos!!
I am a tree
there could be poetry in that, but I think it's been done -- i'll do the burnt stuff -- tomorrow,

where's jack to criticize tomorrow? I like you Jack C!!! (I did say love but edited for fear of that being misconstrued -- what the hell, I love you Jack C)

Post by **mccutcheon** » Thu Mar 14, 2002 3:02 am

sarah you must be drunk

Post by **mccutcheon** » Thu Mar 14, 2002 6:04 pm

so sarah were you drunk?

<rosie> · Post by **<rosie>** » Thu Mar 14, 2002 6:15 pm

that short story is a good read. i feel like i can relate.

<Jack C> · Post by **<Jack C>** » Thu Mar 14, 2002 6:20 pm

Sarah- that's the first time I've heard anyone mention those three words to me in a long time. I'm flattered (i think) but since I don't know you (really) it's hard to take to heart. But thanks! You seem to be one of the few truly cool women out there.

Mc- I thought you said you were going to refrain from sex a bit in your future writing? Don't matter though, write what you feel. You writing about circus midgets by chance?

Post by **mccutcheon** » Thu Mar 14, 2002 6:42 pm

Jack just needs love and Sarah is the only one who saw it!!!!

Post by **mccutcheon** » Thu Mar 14, 2002 6:49 pm

What are we going to do when McCutcheon gets to 1000 posts! Have a party I say!