My Easiest Lay

Post by **mccutcheon** » Mon Feb 19, 2001 4:54 pm

new story by Mc Cutcheon. My Easiest Lay.

rforegger · Post by **rforegger** » Mon Feb 19, 2001 10:44 pm

This is one of thoses "I wish it was me stories" It's good but it leaves the reader with little satisfaction. It's hard to identify with the ass hole who one the lottery while your still broke. If she was fucking Nick, who was Alex fucking? A little expansion would be good. Or at least some reflective thought on the experience. nick now knows a lot more about his brother having played him in bed. And surely there should be a little pain knowing that it was just one lucky night. Too much is bad, too little is potential, so with that in mind I constuctivly say "take it a little farther.
on a side note I got in an arguement with my wife and lead actor for the Manwich. I have three options on casting the role of NATASHA. I was wondering how you envisioned her. 1. i have a Victoria secret model, tall and voluptuous (sp?) Blonde hair and would probably get naked, not the greatest actress. 2. Talented actress, cut and sinister, nudidy a no. body of a 17 year-old but handles herself like a women. 3. Looks like she's 17, acts like she's 17, my actor loves her, no ass but very hot. Probably would be sloth's pick. Any opinions? Keep the fingers going and the imagination flowing Mc.
Ryan

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Post by **mccutcheon** » Mon Feb 19, 2001 10:55 pm

you should use Julia.

Post by **Sloth** » Tue Feb 20, 2001 12:17 am

Yeah Hey Ryan time for a visit. Come up here with marcy and lets get drunk hang out.

rforegger · Post by **rforegger** » Tue Feb 20, 2001 12:21 am

Ooh, we're moving up to Vancouver on June 1st. Were going to look for housing in May. I'll have the film done and we'll stop by, get drunk, take mystery pills, wander into the most depressing places in Seattle, hail a taxi to take us out of there, then really start to feel it.

Post by **Sloth** » Tue Feb 20, 2001 6:01 am

I like this story because its FUNNY and its 100% TRUE.

I can remember Zac saying to me the next morning, "Oh my God Larry I fucked this chick three times last night who thought I was Matt". I get the same nagging desperate feeling when I read it now...

"Goddmait that chick was hot! Why doesn't this kinda shit ever happen to me?"

Post by **mccutcheon** » Tue Feb 20, 2001 8:21 am

the only thing that is true was that she thought I was an angel in bed. and maybe my brother too. wonder what she is doing now?