Crossfader
Somewhere in the bet there's madness.
Rhythymic insanity
sending life burning and howling
into countless nights
and stars
and weekdays plagued with
(misunderstood?) corruption.
I do my best to comprehend
but it all gets a little blurred sometimes
when visions float
real time across my eyes
weaving structure into the mix.
Delusional maybe,
but reassuring all the same.
Sometimes we need to feel
in control of our madness
keep it spinning.
So we can keep it out of our minds,
bring it into our hearts,
and just keep dancing.
Just thought I would throw this out there and see what you folks thought of it. Later,
Rob
crossfader---a poem
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crossfader---a poem
nice one
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crossfader---a poem
Your use of metaphors is predictable, and the rave dance theme is present.....but what i think doesn't matter man, the poem is what you make of it.