For Miss M.

TragicPixie · Post by **TragicPixie** » Sat Apr 02, 2005 10:20 pm

For M.
Against the watercolour sunrise
I wish I were there
lying between your thighs
walking - and taking - fine (white) lines
and rant into the dark night
with skin glowing like porcelain
and crazed manic wild eyes
It's nights like this I die for
on the days that follow
with drugs that leave life so empty and shallow
and only your full lips to save me.

bfj · Post by **bfj** » Sat Apr 02, 2005 11:17 pm

great, but i would take out the "(white)" makes me think of grandmaster flash and takes me out of the poem.

TragicPixie · Post by **TragicPixie** » Sat Apr 02, 2005 11:23 pm

hmm I'll think about that... lol

The real question is... how will Melissa feel about this...

sara · Post by **sara** » Wed Apr 06, 2005 1:22 am

sweet Melissa . . .

(I couldn't resist)

It's very pretty.