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TragicPixie
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Post by TragicPixie »

For M.
Against the watercolour sunrise
I wish I were there
lying between your thighs
walking - and taking - fine (white) lines
and rant into the dark night
with skin glowing like porcelain
and crazed manic wild eyes
It's nights like this I die for
on the days that follow
with drugs that leave life so empty and shallow
and only your full lips to save me.
Lie to me, it takes less time to drink you pretty.
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Post by bfj »

great, but i would take out the "(white)" makes me think of grandmaster flash and takes me out of the poem.
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Post by TragicPixie »

hmm I'll think about that... lol

The real question is... how will Melissa feel about this...
Lie to me, it takes less time to drink you pretty.
sara

Post by sara »

sweet Melissa . . .

(I couldn't resist)

It's very pretty.
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