Look away

Post by **Sloth** » Wed Dec 08, 2004 2:33 pm

Here is a new poetry submission from someone named Esin Penrith.

http://www.paxacidus.com/previews.php?op=page&cid=476

sara · Post by **sara** » Thu Dec 09, 2004 5:04 am

damn! hot damn!

Maverick · Post by **Maverick** » Thu Dec 09, 2004 7:33 pm

I think that's the best poem I've read around here. Right on, whatever your name is.

bfj · Post by **bfj** » Thu Dec 09, 2004 11:54 pm

very good, love the energy and the disdain...for everything

Post by **Sloth** » Sun Dec 12, 2004 7:05 pm

I posted the poem today. Welcome to the wonderful world of Shite Poetry, Esin.

marky · Post by **marky** » Mon Dec 13, 2004 6:16 am

"The Wonderful World of Shite Poetry" - hey that would make a good children's book.

Sloth - have you ever written or considered writing a children's book? I think you'd do a fabulous job.

marky · Post by **marky** » Mon Dec 13, 2004 6:26 am

And I don't mean that in a mean way, incase it was taken so.

I do think the poem posted "Look Away" was very good. It reminds me a little of this poem I should probably get around to typing here sometime - someone I know had found it, this typed poem in two line stanzas tucked in the wall of an apartment my friend moved into. It was from the time of the gulf war and is about the gulf war and the media. I'm almost sure I saved that poem. I'll have to dig it out soon.

marky · Post by **marky** » Mon Dec 13, 2004 6:30 am

No name on it, nothing. No way in hell to find out who wrote it.