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Cutch's new Novel

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Nothing like starting a novel with alot of music references and a fat guy wanking. Seriously, I think it's a good start, but I have one question...did you ever finish the other one? Not Burnt Roof, the one with the writer. I liked the first part that I read, but neverheard any more about it. Keep writing...have you noticed how many views NYC scribbles has? You're reaching cult status.
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writing is just cum in the mouth.

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I'm half way done with that piece of shit. hate it now, will cum over it when I go back to it.
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writing is just cum in the mouth.

Thanks for that image...
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how the hell is that quote function supposed to work?
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read the three chapters of "Tour" that are up, really liked it, is there more...Mc if you need to take a tour of the south for inspiration let me know. I'm a rowdy companion when down south, and if you want me to dress up like a woman and call me shannon that will be 25 dollars a day...
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Books as objects

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The one with the writer is half done. It is called Super Cool. But I got frustrated, as you can tell. Tour is 1/4 done. Burnt is all done, well except to be edited and published. Ya know, no big deal really. I'm at three stages of three novels and not one is where I want it to be. Books as objects. That is what I want.
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MC and BF Jake,
If you ever really do want to take a tour of the south for whatever reason, please let me know. I'd be more than happy to take you to as many honky tonks as you desire -- however, I can't promise that you won't get into trouble. Women in the south are allowed to get away with a lot more in honky tonks, from what I've seen. But then again,in the Blue Rose, which is this very scummy bar, and fun, near Gulf Port, I saw one woman clear a table with another woman's backside. It wasn't pretty. I just stood there thinking, what in the world would make you want to do that. I believe it had something to do with a man -- go figure.

Also, MC, your Judy Blume poem is good.
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Blue Rose. I know that bar.

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Is there really a bar down there called the Blue Rose? In Burnt the bar in NJ, where Trevor and Mike hang out in is called the Blue Rose. If you tell me the guy who owns it is named Purdy than that would really be weird.

Thanks for the comments on the poem. It is Marky Silly Goose really.
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I really like what you said about childhood "we like it because it is over". I have turned into a very nostalgic sort of person, and sometimes I try to change that about myself because it seems only partly rational. Reading what you wrote really helped me formulate my ideas about that.
The Judy Blume poem is cute, too. I think when you get around to telling your Bellvue story, you might just find you've done your best work ever.
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Thanks Marky

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God I hope that means I'm getting better. I'm watching Seinfeld on DVD and there was progress there.
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are you inferring that his bellvue stay will lead to his best work ever? see i've been asked lately why i've turned into such a crazy mother fucker, and i say "you've got to live it to write it." here's to surviving and getting it all down on paper, and cheers to Dennis Johnson for doing JUST that!
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God- Guys On Drugs.

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If it was good enough for Jesus' Son it is good enough for me.
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yes, it's really called that and no Perdy or Purdy -- I don't know the owner. It's a biker bar -- and really, really a place I would not want to take anyone from here, but would
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a rose by any other name

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Someone who read Burnt said to me that Blue Rose was too 'gay' a anme for the bar I was writing about in NJ, but if you tell me it is a biker bar, well than that is good enough for me. The biker bar in Burnt is called S.L. Slaughters.
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