New Burnt Face Jake Poem

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This ones getting posted if the other one was no matter what y'all say

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New Burnt Face Jake Poem

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I'll admit I didn't like the last one.

I think writing a poem about your wife (unless she dies tragically or something) is a bit naff.

Of course when I told Linda that she was not pleased. Maybe I am just not a fan of sentimental poetry.

But I like this one... because with death, the sentimentality seems less ridiculous.

Enjoy...

http://www.paxacidus.com/content410.php
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I like that word "naff." Where does it come from?
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Naff is British slang.

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Post by marky »

I just tried to use that link and it says "object not found on this server".
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yeah, can we fix that sloth.
thanks
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Post by Sloth »

Okay here is the new URL.

In case anyone is wondering why things like this happen: I rewrote the Apache mod_rewrite algorhythm so its spit out Google friendly URLS instead of numbers.

http://www.paxacidus.com/bobby_pax.html

Burnt, how about fixing your picture of the bb?
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I don't know what to do. I thought I posted a pic from my yahoo briefcase. shouldn't that work?
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This is what you have listed for your pic:

http://www.uploadyourimages.com/img/801903ryan84.jpg

There doesn't seem to be anything there.
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That's why he's sad.
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I am not sad.

I am mad.

Mad as a hatter.

Woo-hoo!

Who's got the moonshine?
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me in NYC and I got these drugs that do the trick. I think the street name is crack. I don't see the big deal. it's sorta nice but sometimes getting to bed is a problem, but I don't sleep anyway.
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I hope that is a joke!
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okay this shit is up! meanwhile I am going through moving hell and haven't slept or ate in 40 hours!
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Did crack with Kerry last night. that is why he gave the speech of his life and was foaming at the mouth.
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Burnt been hangin' with Kate the Great who is all about powders.
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