Go ahead, post them. Poetry has an individual appeal, so some will like hers, and some won't. Those who don't don't have to read it. Just like Howard Stern and the conservatives.
It was better than the last one - it was okay; but I still don't think it's terrribly great.
A few lines seemed ... almost cliche and predictable. Also, the last lines sort of ... I dunno seemed out of place maybe? I dunno.
