New Poem by kitten

[martino]

before i forget however, i want to say that i think that much of what borgy writes is very cool.

[mccutcheon]

that's why I leave the tennage girls to Sloth

[borgy]

teenage

[mccutcheon]

yeah them too

[Guest]

well excuse me for [/i]living martino. you are a very angry, angry man. i have never seen someone who took life so SERIOUSLY. and doesn't the word "sober" usually refer to drinking? i don't get drunk; i get stoned.

i am suddenly extremely embarrassed to be german.

[Guest]

actually i've always been embarrassed to be german, as i've grown being taught by my parents to be disgusted and ashamed by it. they said all germans are big-boned and masculine looking, anal, and have nasty tempers. but now i'm REALLY embarrassed. i don't think i'll ever divulge that info to anyone i meet again.

[martino]

wow everybody check out the guest who thinks in wack stereotypes

didn't know that type would enjoy this site, but life is full of surprises, isn't it

[mccutcheon]

Isn't that Kitten? Who knows no better.

[borgy]

i think the guest was too embarrassed to log-in as well. imagine the horrors of being raised to be embarrassed of oneself. i think the guest's life is one hell of an embarrassment. Girlfriend!

[cesxy]

well excuse me for [/i]living martino. you are a very angry, angry man. i have never seen someone who took life so SERIOUSLY. and doesn't the word "sober" usually refer to drinking? i don't get drunk; i get stoned.

i am suddenly extremely embarrassed to be german.

whoa! look who's talkin?? go back to your old posts. i believe you're the one who has been conveying drama and anger. you know what, your two cents is definitely worth nothing. id rather be like martino who's intelligent, smart and who takes life seriously than be like you -- all shallow and who doesnt value life. Germans should be embarassed of you. not the other way around.

and for your information, "stoned" also means drunk or intoxicated.

[Guest]

She ain't even really German, She's as German as I am Irish. But I don't think we should pick on her. The kids got problems. And it is funny that Martino went out of his way when he didn't need to to try to help here. The facts are all there, the posts I mean.

[mccutcheon]

That was by me. Fuck a duck.

[Brett]

Scottish have nasty tempers, Germans like beer, English are afraid of Dentists, French are afraid of showers, Spanish yell alot, Greeks find sheep 'friendly', Dutch are all whores and drug addicts, Swedish are all hot, Irish are despondant, Italians are all close talkers and Belgians are chocolate eating, diamond wearing wanna be Frenchmen.

[TragicPixie]

hmmm... and Italians are hairy, and the Irish are great poets... when you can pull them away from the bar and Germans have flat arses ... but I always thought it was the Welsh who liked the sheep...

Regardless though... enough with the drama eh? I'm gonna go out on a limb and say most of us are out of highschool... so let's leave these antics there yeah?

Now then; the poem was okay but in my totally honest and candid opinion by no means perfect. Upon a second reading artistically some beats were off; free verse is a little difficult on that but she's young. I see now I probably should be harder on her for that then... cause fuck knows I'd be upset if someone told me my stuff was good simply because they thought "well, hell she's young I'll encourage her to keep writing even though this could be better."

[martino]

twas a stupid mistake for me to pick on somebody who has serious problems. no sense in expecting everybody in the kitchen to be able to take the heat. i wasn't thinking and was just writing in the salty rosie-type style that i find amusing.

hopefully no feelings have been permanently hurt; i think kitten is smart, interesting and, when she is not too full of herself, charming too. since i am a firm believer in wilde's maxim that there are no interesting or uninteresting, but only charming or charmless people, this can be taken as a compliment.