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"little hours"
I am elated by life through little hours
little hours spent with you.
I become drunk upon the elixer of my little hours.
Life is filled with our little hours

Filled with the fire of passion
where I dominate and conquer you
when you surrender to my whim and need
filled with deep moans and primal languages.
filled with touch and feel
where I bloom like a deep red rose
and you fill me completely.
Until we are both to exhausted to speak.

Filled with the warmth of our hearth from a home built entirely of love
and our sweet kisses
when I surrender to you completely
when my needs not be spoke outloud
and you dominate me
waves of pleasure sweeping over me like the tide rushing in


Little hours filled with laughter
gazing into your eyes
and being enveloped in your arms
caressed by your love
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i love it! :D
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thanks :)
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Hey Kitten, here is a poem by a girl I know. Thought I'd share it with you.

Fuck Love


fuck love
all you need is a great pair of shoes


will you take me home with you
i said gently near your ear
mistaking my words for what
i should have said
i want to know what i never did
why i¹m only good enough to fuck
when we fall helplessly
finding each other again
and again

and you said that it wasn¹t time
but didn¹t you feel better
like we had missed each other
that all we needed was there

then you said you didn¹t know
if you had ever loved anyone
but my love
love is everywhere

-Malia march 2002
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mc cutch

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that poem is the story of my life man
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