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I just joined up and submitted a story

Posted: Sun Aug 15, 2004 11:07 pm
by doobien
This place seems really cool. I was just inspired two write a auto -biography on my life Entitled Path Of Destruction.

Look forward to making an impact here.

doobien.com

Were do I go to find my subbmission.

doobien: title Betrayal

Posted: Mon Aug 16, 2004 5:09 am
by marky
Doobien's a pretty cool name.

Posted: Mon Aug 16, 2004 4:18 pm
by Sloth
Doobien,

Submit again... I was working on the site yesterday and the submission did not come through 100%...

Thanks...

Your sights bad ass .

Posted: Wed Aug 18, 2004 7:21 am
by doobien
Please post some of your reads in my forum. Your web page and forum get a fucking thumbs up. I'll re submit it asap.

IVE ALSO ADDED YOUR BANNER ON MY FORUM and aslo will be on my web page serious coodoes.

doobien.com :twisted:

Posted: Fri Aug 20, 2004 3:11 pm
by Sloth
The Mike story. Even though it has a moral, it seems to be a corehent piece. The other stories are, uh, plainly the work of a psychotic mind. I don't think they could printed anywhere.

Getting back to the Michael story, your anti-hero drinks too much and then drives into a tree splitting his head open. Why? Is this what actually happened to 'Michael' in real life?

Well in a story, why not have him form a rock band, sleep with a million girls and then fly a plane into the Pentagon and wipe out the rest of those cocksuckers that Al Quaida missed? Have him kill you for betrayal? Rob liquor stores and shoot random people?

Fiction is supposed to be a free art form. Even if the story is based upon a true event, you are allowed to indulge. To make it end like a Mother Against Drunk Driving afternoon special is a bit sad.

As for making an impact here, the biggest way to make an impact is to learn to write, organize your thoughts, get published somewhere else, and then come back and tell us all to go fuck off.

You are still young enough to do it. I couldn't write for shit until I was 27. Some people tell me I still can't. I'll show those cunts... get the idea?

excelent advice and feed back.

Posted: Fri Aug 20, 2004 7:32 pm
by doobien
I'm writing my auto-biography live on my forum and it will be detailed and organized, and yes I'm a little nuts but enjoyed a hell off a ride.

My auto biography is my life in print and will blow you away in time theres 196 pages to go Enjoy.

Hope to see you In my home.

doobien.com

I have a long process untill I'm consider an author and won't vear from my path.

asdf lkjp

Posted: Fri Aug 20, 2004 8:19 pm
by martino
this is a joke, no? people don't actually *write* such things, do they, even when they are nuts?

come on, mc, admit it, this is just some major-league hoax you are playing on us, right? come out of hiding!

you got me

Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2004 4:27 pm
by Guest